ShiplematNot a bad start at all! one tip I would give is that yeah you could slow it down a bit. If you make the glint off the water going very slowly, i think it will look really good. one thing you could even try is making it on a HIGHER frame rate, but making only the glints go slowly (like keep each picture for multiple frames in a row before changing again) and then try to make the eyelids with more frames so it looks smooth - other than that, this genuinely looks like a great start 😃
CupyYou draw better then me on here lol, but keep up the good work ^w^