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  • SilyElixir's profile pictureSilyElixir• 2022-09-11 05:12:23 (7613083)

    Back on the lifting scene, you could had the stickman lift the other did a bit higher by making him vertical and above his head, before he ragdolls the other dude into the ground

  • SilyElixir's profile pictureSilyElixir• 2022-09-11 05:11:06 (7613081)

    If you don't want the stickman obliterated, then make the Lazer larger, more direct & quicker. Once the Lazer leaves in quick fashion, it would leave a burnt cartoon that slowly falls by gravity into pile of ashes, Tom and Jerry style, bottom to up

  • SilyElixir's profile pictureSilyElixir• 2022-09-11 05:09:02 (7613080)

    Reassemble a silhouette of the stickman and get rid of those lines as times go on, to show how the stickman got obliterated. The lines should work like shadows.

  • SilyElixir's profile pictureSilyElixir• 2022-09-11 05:07:59 (7613078)

    At frame 7, I would duplicate so it can have 2 frames if image 7 to make the stop in motion more realistic.
    You should also make frame 9 slightly lower or get it rid of it completely to make the slam seem more powerful
    For the Lazer scene, you may wanna make small lines that

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September 10th, 2022 07:19:38
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